The waves crash against the giant rocks
I can feel the mist from the ocean on my face
I take a deep breath and walk into the cold water
A wave crashes against me and pushes me back
I surge forward deeper and deeper into the water
I join my sisters and we splash around and jump over waves
What a wonderful day at the beach
Ah yes, the beach is a wonderful place. I like the flow of this poem. What a nice slice, great job!
ReplyDeleteThis sounds really fun. It's been a while since I've been to the beech, but I know I had a lot of fun. Great slice!
ReplyDeleteThis sounds really fun. It's been a while since I've been to the beech, but I know I had a lot of fun. Great slice!
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ReplyDeleteThis sounds like it is really fun! You described everything really well!
ReplyDeleteOoh! Nice Slice, it is very descriptive. Good job!
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